MY AERIES

On the essay I did I got an A-, and I was somewhat surprised I got that letter grade. Yes I put effort in it and I thought I would fail. But maybe it's because I knew I could do better. The reason I received that grade was because I put everything from the  prompt on my paper, like the theme, tone, diction, etc. I like that I got an A, but it feels like I actually deserve a B or C well because I think I messed up in half the body paragraph and the last paragraph. And in this class I have done everything and the grade I believe I have in the class is a B+ or A-. I mean I did do bad I two quizzes but done all of my work

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